Category: Writers Block
I saw you there, well sort of anyway.
I may be blind, but it was a gorgeous day.
We met, became friends, said we'd be until the end.
Yet I want to be more than that, much much more.
I want to be your lover in times of joy and war.
My love for you burns like a thousand fires.
My vains contain more than blood, there full of hot passtion and desire.
I long to hold you in my loving arms, stroke your silkened hair.
I want to cover you in kisses everywhere!
I love you, your funny, smart, and sweet.
You are truly the girl of my dreams.
Awww...that's so sweet!
Who's this special girl?
"I saw you there, well sort of anyway." - Can't say why, but I liked this line.
You said "There full of" should've been "they're."
I like this; good job.
Alison
I didn't care about spelling at the time. As far as who it is, I'll tell you if I can trust you. I'm not trying to be mean, but that's just how I feel about it.
It's all good, I'm just a spelling freak and tend to point stuff like that out.
That's good. Glad you like it.